Thank you for your tip, which will work well for a final proofreading.
But I was hoping for a less tedious workflow for proofreading while drafting.
This WWDC video seems to indicate that each change can be queried and accepted/rejected individually. (See at about 2:25 into the clip.)
I’m yet to try it on iPad, or macOS, but on iOS it doesn’t seem to work the way it was shown in the video. I wonder if the experience differs by app? I’ll update my iPad and try the app in the demo.
One only just updated to iOS 18 so I’m catching up.